Conclusion

 



             In this project, I learned a lot about how I can expres all my ideas and thoughs, and also in what Im good or bad. I understand the important order about the things in a sentence, to be concentrated in the tests, to not mix all the presents with the past. I learned more about my classmates, and I feel very happy to finish this project.

Octopus love

                     

This story is about a couple of octopus that had an amazing adventure trying to save their lives of a seller.

This started with the two octopus that were in love in a small container full of water. Suddenly, the female octopus was put it away of her boyfriend and put it on in a little freezer to prepare with her flesh a delicious dish.

The male octopus felt so nervous and angry, and tried to do something about his girlfriend, so he jumped and followed the man that stole his partner through the street to the man`s truck. In the truck, the female octopus was inside the little freezer, but she can saw the male octopus trying to help her of the salesman. But suddenly, he saw them trying to escape through the window of the truck, so he tried to get them but he collapsed the truck and he wallowed in the street. The couple of octopus saw the opportunity to ran away from the man and they started to jump through a line of pools that were in the city. In the other hand, the salesman was hurted by the accident, but he woke up and walked to catch the couple of octopus, but he didn´t make it, so he thought about follow them by the truck. In the last pool, the octopus jumped to low, and the salesman catched them. He didn´t noticed that the truck didn´t stop and felt into the water, throwing the couple of octopus in a rope. The female octopus with the male octopus though that they were save. but a seagull took away the male octopus. His parner, the female octopus, felt so angry about the situation, and she decided to help her boyfriend.

THE END        

prewritting of My first day as a university student

  At my first day in university, I felt so excitement, but also nervous. My first day at the university was so ecitement. First, I arrived later, like at 8:15 in the morning, but a second grade student helped me. I told her that I didn´t know where it was the classroom, so I gave her the Little maps that I had and she guided me to my classroom. (too repetitive). When I passed through the door, all my classmates saw me very confused, so I sat inmediatelly in the first chair that I saw. Miss trillo was my teacher and she explained all the schedules, classrooms, professors and kind of stuffs different from the college to university. When the presentation finished, I walked alone with scare because I didn´t know anybody, but after I imagined that, a girl stopped in front of me and said "hi". She was in the same career as me, and her name was Alondra. Together, we started to walk to our next class, and also met us. She was so generous and friendly with me, so I felt very happy to met someone like her in my first day at the university. When I arrived to my house, my parents asked me how was it, and I said to them that was amazing. Then, I went to bed with so much anxiety for my second day as a university student.





             

As you see, In my prewritting I used a lot "SO", but then I remembered about FANBOYS. I consider that in this paragraph I didn´t have mistakes in the grammar parts, but to make the sentence I was confuse in the order of the things, like the prepositions. Im also too repetitive in some parts ( I wrote where ) and the in the final paragraph I fixed that.

brainstorm of early bird

-sun
-relax
-energy
-exercises
-sleep
-ride a bike
-hang out
-security
-go shoping
-summer
-hot
-beach
-Friends
-ice cream
-natural juice

those were the ideas that came to my mind when I thought about why I prefer the day over night. I consider that Im not  good to create stuffs, but i try to do my best.

A person important to me.

       My mom is a medium height woman and medium built. She is in her late 30s. She has big round dark eyes. She has medium lenght straight and brown hair. Ana maria has olive skin. She is an extremely independent woman because she doesn´t need the approval of other people in her life. She is a very fashionable and affectionate mom. I consider her a very thoughtful person with her family and friends, besides she is extremely humorous because she always is telling jokes. She is so beautiful in all aspects to me, although she is not perfect, she means the world to me.

Here I am with my mom, my father and my little brother.

                  This paragraph was made in practice class two, and I decided to show it here because we had a unit called "A person important to you" in Professor Chamorro´s class.

My first draft about why I prefer mornings 08/sep/2014

       I prefer mornings to do all the activities that I love. I feel with a lot of energy to do them because the day usually has a big sun to enjoy. The things that I often do in the morning are: 

*Do exercises

sleep until midday

and hang out to different places in the city with my family or friends.

             When I do that activities I feel in peace and relaxed because it is not dark and dangerous to hang out and do them. Although, I work all weekends, this is not an impediment to enjoy the day. For me, the morning is the time of the day to do all the activities that I like with more hours and light to be safe of the darkness.

      As you can see, my first draft was very simple, with poor ideas and always the same words. I try to fixed but it was  difficult to me because at that time I didn´t have a great vocabulary.Besides, I didn´t explain good the reasons that why I prefer mornings.

      I put it images to make easy the understanding of the idea and activities that I wrote.

The plan

             The plan to kill Sollozo and McCluskey was made by Michael, who was worried about his father safety. The plan started at Louis Restaurant, where the meeting of Michael, Sollozo and McCluskey began. Michael went to the restaurant without any gun, to prove Sollozo´s trust that he was a honest guy about not doing any stupid attack. When they arrived al Louis Restaurant, Mike asked permission to go to the toilet, where was going to be a gun hiding by Clemenza. The youngest Corleone boy took the gun and walked to the table where was Sollozo and the police man. Then, Mike shooted them and run outside the restaurant quickly. All the plan succeed well, and Mike killed his enemies.


   As you can see, In this paragraph I started in present simple and finished in past simple. All I needed to do was to keep the present simple or the past sinple, no mixed all because the main idea of the paragraph is not clearly with two tenses.